Finding a balance: work, life and writing

Writing is time consuming. Thinking, planning, writing, reading and editing: it all takes time. Editing is what takes up most of my time.

The first draft of a story doesn’t usually take me long but kicking the budding story into shape does. I spend considerably longer editing than I do writing the first draft. (Yes, I am thinking about changing how I write, to see if I can get more of it right the first time, but I’ll always have to spend time editing. No matter how long I mull it over, the first idea is badly formed compared to the final one. Writing helps me develop the idea.)

I’m trying to clear my various desks for November so that I can focus on NaNoWriMo. I have two stories to finalise and submit to writers’ groups and magazines. Time is short and I’m not sure how to squeeze everything in.

Isn’t it unfortunate that I need to pay the bills? If I didn’t, and if I didn’t have a food habit, I could spend more time doing the things that I enjoy and the things that make me a better writer. Like so many writers, I have to work on my craft while also working 40 hours a week, maintaining a social life, eating, sleeping and trying to remember to exercise. We’re really busy people, what with the networking, submission preparation, reviewing stories, preparing for spoken word evenings, reading for research and for fun.

It’s not inspiration that makes a good writer, it’s hard work. I find that encouraging.

The perfect submission: Nicola Morgan at the EIBF

Today, I attended a workshop on how to write the perfect submission by Nicola Morgan. She wrote the book on submissions (Write to be Published). To date I haven’t bought the book but there’s still time.

The workshop was a quick summary of the main points that you should keep in mind when submitting a proposal to an agent or a publisher. It was quite inspiring. Yes, there’s an aspect of luck in whether you get pubished or not: you need to have the right book and send it to the right publisher at the right time. Do that, and all is good. Unless, of course, your submission letter is so terrible that no one looks at your excerpt, of course.

I learned a lot today and am write a submissin letter for my NaNoWriMo effort for the practice of it. It might help clarify what I wrote.

NaNoWriMo completed!

NaNoWriMo 2010 winner badgeI am deeply pleased to have reached the 50,000 mark on my NaNoWriMo text. The ending might have been a little precipitous, but I believe “random ending” is one of the NaNoWriMo merit badges and I’m just pleased to have earned one. I didn’t earn caffeine abuse, NaNo socializing or secret noveling but know I got

  • word-count padding for strategic avoidance of contractions,
  • creative nonfiction for describing something that happened to me but claiming my main character experienced it,
  • the 5,000 word day,
  • the eureka moment for changing the killer at the very end and
  • victory. Sweet victory.

This was a fun experience and I think I’ll do it again next year. In the meanwhile I have to decide whether to read, edit and/or share my first attempt at longish fiction. At the moment I’m not sure I’ll do any of those.